4135 State Street
Salem, Oregon 97301
February 3, 2011
Mr. George Smith
Flick Photo Shop
311 West Street
Buhl, Idaho 83316
Dear Mr. George Smith:
I purchased this camera at your store two months ago. The camera is still under warranty, so I would like it replaced.
Since the camera is still under warranty, I assume you will repair it free of charge.
Sincerely yours,
Eliseo Cortes
Pretty good!
ReplyDelete"So" is a connecting word, so you need to use a comma like I just did in this sentence instead of using a period.
Also, double check how many spaces go after the closing line "sincerely yours". I think it should be 4 spaces.